Saturday, December 8, 2007

umnmnmn....

THE ECSTATIC ADDICTION

The craving seems endless,
The taste buds just starve,
Beholding those chocolates,
It’s impossible to stop drooling!!
The condition may turn hapless,
If I don’t pick up a snicker,
My hands just grab it,
The bar is naked in no time,
My lips rest on the bar,
Slowly, but eagerly,
I take my time,
To let it melt,
To experience what’s in the crust,
To let the soft fluid ooze out itself,
THAT’S something I don’t wanna miss,
And after that it’s just a heavenly bliss……..

11 Comments:

At December 8, 2007 at 10:01 PM , Blogger busy-writer said...

sigh.
cholocates.
heavenly yeahhh!

 
At December 11, 2007 at 1:13 PM , Blogger Siddharth Joshi said...

i don't like poems!

 
At December 11, 2007 at 9:07 PM , Blogger Princess Consuela Banana Hammock said...

omg !!!
that was heavenly i can just imagine a snicker dangling far from my reach .... but sigh .... thats good stuff ....

 
At December 12, 2007 at 6:27 PM , Blogger manisha said...

@bluebutterfly
oohh..u know..d thing is ...i never had a snicker..never tasted one..:P..thnx..

 
At December 12, 2007 at 6:27 PM , Blogger manisha said...

@sid....

so dont read one dumbo!!! :P

 
At December 16, 2007 at 1:41 AM , Blogger Sammy said...

thanks a lot girl..

saimish.desai@gmail.com

email it to me there...

thanks a ton, coz me good with starting a topic, but my endings r not happy..

readers want something happy, but mine r more emotional..

lemme see what u got from me,..

and once again, thanks a ton Manisha !!!

 
At December 20, 2007 at 11:42 PM , Blogger Winnie the poohi said...

u made chocolates almost a sexual pleasure..

lovely!!

*munches on dark chocolates

 
At December 22, 2007 at 8:25 PM , Blogger ★●Shadow Stalker●★ said...

Beautiful. :)

-Sam.

 
At December 22, 2007 at 10:05 PM , Blogger Setu said...

really nice..
keep blogging! :)

btw, i saw ur post in the creative writing community on orkut.. u might want read some my posts if u're looking for fiction..

 
At December 31, 2007 at 9:29 PM , Blogger Matangi Mawley said...

good post!:)

 
At January 6, 2008 at 10:06 AM , Blogger Zahid said...

Thnak god !!! You were eating a chocolate !!!

 

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