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THE ECSTATIC ADDICTION
The craving seems endless,
The taste buds just starve,
Beholding those chocolates,
It’s impossible to stop drooling!!
The condition may turn hapless,
If I don’t pick up a snicker,
My hands just grab it,
The bar is naked in no time,
My lips rest on the bar,
Slowly, but eagerly,
I take my time,
To let it melt,
To experience what’s in the crust,
To let the soft fluid ooze out itself,
THAT’S something I don’t wanna miss,
And after that it’s just a heavenly bliss……..
The taste buds just starve,
Beholding those chocolates,
It’s impossible to stop drooling!!
The condition may turn hapless,
If I don’t pick up a snicker,
My hands just grab it,
The bar is naked in no time,
My lips rest on the bar,
Slowly, but eagerly,
I take my time,
To let it melt,
To experience what’s in the crust,
To let the soft fluid ooze out itself,
THAT’S something I don’t wanna miss,
And after that it’s just a heavenly bliss……..
11 Comments:
sigh.
cholocates.
heavenly yeahhh!
i don't like poems!
omg !!!
that was heavenly i can just imagine a snicker dangling far from my reach .... but sigh .... thats good stuff ....
@bluebutterfly
oohh..u know..d thing is ...i never had a snicker..never tasted one..:P..thnx..
@sid....
so dont read one dumbo!!! :P
thanks a lot girl..
saimish.desai@gmail.com
email it to me there...
thanks a ton, coz me good with starting a topic, but my endings r not happy..
readers want something happy, but mine r more emotional..
lemme see what u got from me,..
and once again, thanks a ton Manisha !!!
u made chocolates almost a sexual pleasure..
lovely!!
*munches on dark chocolates
Beautiful. :)
-Sam.
really nice..
keep blogging! :)
btw, i saw ur post in the creative writing community on orkut.. u might want read some my posts if u're looking for fiction..
good post!:)
Thnak god !!! You were eating a chocolate !!!
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